Sentence Corrections

1. I asked my grandfather what were these objects and why was he still keeping in box well seal.

I asked my grandfather what were these objects and why was he still keeping them in a box well seal.

2. My grandfather told that these object had a great meaning for him because they remind him his adventure when he was young.

My grandfather said that these objects have a great meaning, because they remind him of his adventures when he was young.

3. They found that 600 years ago, there was an empire that ruled the ancient China of Ming Dynasty called Lun Luo. He had a rock stamp with his name on it.

It was found that 600 years ago there was an empire that ruled the ancient China, during Ming Dynasty, called Lun Luo. It had a rock stamp with its name on it.

4. At first, she could not see where her family had gone, but on the other side of the massive old-fashioned TV set; she could see a light piercing through the room.


At first, she could not see where her family had gone, but on the other side of the massive old-fashioned TV set, she could see a light piercing through the room.


5. Why do people get dreams when they sleep? I had this doubt when I was young and when I asked my grandfather about this doubt he told me that,”people get dreams because mind just can’t blank.”
Why do people have dreams when they sleep? I had this doubt when I was young and when I asked my grandfather about it he told me that people have dreams because mind can’t blank.

6. A mother and father decided they needed a break, so they wanted to head out for a night on the town. But, they worried about their son, so they called their most trusted housekeeper to care about their son. When the housekeeper arrived, the three children were already fast asleep in the bed. So, the housekeeper just sits around with children.

A couple decided they needed a break, so they wanted to head out for a night in town. They worried about their son, though, so they called their most trusted housekeeper to take care of him. When she arrived, the three children were already fast asleep in the bed. The housekeeper, then, just sits around with the children.